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Submitted: Jul 13, 2008 Reads: 52 Comments: 4 Likes: 2
"With the taste of your lips...a taste of poison paradise..."
Love is hard
Like the mushy song of a bard
Your lips taste of poison
My heart is broken
Whenever you leave me
I can never feel free
I see you all around the round table
Like King Arthur on cable
I'm on a fast ride
I can't choose a side
Free me baby
Free me from this toxic love and save me
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this is good1 especially with a song by brittany spears!
~Lemon
Posted: Jul 13, 2008
ohhh! this is touching, taking out time to write down brittany's sond it sure shows you are agood writer.
any way just keep it up................
Posted: Jul 14, 2008
WOW...one more different and intense poem...
Posted: Jul 30, 2008
very good
Posted: Sep 5, 2008
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