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Mr. Hollywood

Poetry By: Kathryn
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I'm not sure how I feel about this one, it's very different from my other pieces, but I like the style. It's kind of a one-sided conversational poem that uses this theme of hollywood to bring out a subtle love story. Feedback is appreciated!


Submitted:Oct 11, 2007    Reads: 175    Comments: 2    Likes: 3   


Well, hello Mr. Hollywood. Good to see you again.

Do you really think I'm lovely?

What was that? You think my hair smells really good?

Oh, delicious you said. Sorry I didn't catch that

I was too bedazzled by your smile.

That laugh of yours is really something,

It goes great with all the rest of you,

Especially when you're staring at me.

Those hands of yours fit quite nicely

Laced between my palms and fingers.

Oh, please, you're making me blush,

Quit saying how lovely I am.

Oh but please, don't stop telling me

I'm a movie star.

Did anyone ever tell you that those eyes of yours

Are filled with all this charm and seduction?

I'm being seriously serious when I suggest

That we get together sometime

And discuss making this idea I have into a film.

It's a wonderful story about a guy and a girl

That meet and fall in love.

Like all good romance movies

It has a happy ending with a passionate kiss.

Why yes I was inspired.

You won't believe me,

But it's based on us.





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