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My Shadow's Name

Poem By: Keepers River
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Tags: shadow, dark

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Submitted: Apr 11, 2008    Reads: 61    Comments: 7    Likes: 3   


My shadow's name is Eris.

Eris. Dark-haired, black-eyed. Heart of flint, falcon-light fingers.

Face sharp, light and black. Black, Black, always black; 

Snake-tongue 'gainst oblivion lips. Held high, bone sharp, a knife given a Kiss of Death.

Tight black clothing, and a cloak of night, without the gift of stars.

Feet o' floating, black as well.

Weaver of poison, enprisoner of the sunlight.

Laugh enough to melt a heart. And then bind it silently!

Yet glimmers 'neth, a spark lingers,

remembering a time when the dark was a far-flung dream.

A dream known as Eris.

Who is now my shadow.


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Too good for words!!!!! Wow this poem was so fabulous!!! The imagery was so wonderful that I seriously like saw Eris in front of me, her figure coming together before my eyes. Just such a wonderful poem. Great word choice, also. If I could I would press *i like it* a hundred thousand times:D

Posted: Apr 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! I also have another with Eris in it, I'll post it soon; promise!

i love it seriously good job

Posted: Apr 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! If you want I can post my other Eris poem.

The imagery is so clear! I would love to see your other Eris poem. You're on bubbly's top ten list for the week, and now I see why. You truly have an amazing talent.
MA

Posted: May 4, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm on bubbly's top ten list for the week? hm. thanks MA, I didn't know that! I'll post my other Eris poem. I'm delighted that you like my poem! You can read my others, if you like. Amazing talent? I guess I'm kinda good at poetry... Thanks!

Wow, this is amazing! Seriously. Love the imagery! I don't know how to describe how much I like this poem. Beautiful! ~Em

Posted: May 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Really? I could say that I'm flattered but today I'm not too hot on modesty. (did that even make sense???)

your shadow sounds scary.
take care.
Lydia_xxxx

Posted: May 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Eris is a bit scary, but when you get to know her.....
Anyway, Thanks for da' comment!
I just love it when I get comments!
KR

SCARY!! But I love your shadow, it reminds me of the darkest of night with the moon shining, a single movement, a slightest rustle, dark shadow,is hwat your Eris is.
Hahaha, I'm being poetic again.
Anyways, GOOD JOB!

Posted: May 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Hahahahahha! We just can't help ourselves, can we? Hahahahaha...
Anyhow, I've written another poem about Eris, do you think I should post it????
Still laughing helplessly,
KR

oOoOo good good write more more. BTW you should check out my latest novel! have a great day!

Posted: Jun 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Heeheehee!!!!!! Love you like it! I will, I will, don't worry my dearest!
With crazy love,
KR



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