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To My Brother In Heaven

Poem By: Keepers River
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A poem to everyone touched by war. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 21, 2008    Reads: 77    Comments: 5    Likes: 2   


She sits by the grave.
Of her brother.
Killed by giants.
In a far-away land.
In a war none here,
Will even feel.
Except those few people,
who have felt the Wrath of War.
She sheds a tear.
And offers a flower,

in hopes these small
pitiful gifts,
will reach his soul
in Heaven.
She stands.
Then turns away
for the last time,
picking up a suitcase
filled with memories.
And as her mother
drives her away,
she sees an angel
more beautiful than even
words can tell.
It scoops up the tear.
And cups the flower
in its hands.
And it flys away.
She smiles,
and one more tear,
goes to her brother in Heaven,
killed by giants
in a far-away land.


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Comments:

Oh so beautiful! I've never had a family member go to war so I can't compare, but I've had people die before. You nearly made me cry reading this poem. It was so beautiful. The imagery...the descriptions were just marvelous. They really opened up the poem to a new level. I absolutely loved it. Great poem! :D

Posted: Apr 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! ^_^

HOLY... ok that was awsome.

Posted: Apr 24, 2008

Author Comment:

your dam right it is!

that was asum poem it is sad but good

Posted: Apr 25, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks! I'm glad you liked it! but I suppose almost everyone likes it when their work is positively commented on.

it's so true and so sad....Tears came in eyes....honest writing, buddy....write more poems on the theme of war...u r doing justice to it.....
Well done...
going for "I like it button"

Posted: Apr 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! I'll try to write more war poems.

Good Job! I luv it! It really touched me. 5 stars all around!
See ya

Posted: May 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Stars!!!! *o*
I LOVE STARS!!!!
*hyperventilating*
*KR FAINTS from happiness at getting 5 FREAKING STARS!!!!*

Star-dly,
KR



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