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The fireworks of heartbreak

Poem By: kidarox123
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Tags: heartbreak, love, poem

A poemish thing about heartbreak. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 11, 2008    Reads: 71    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


Hearbreak is such a strange feeling.

It's feeling of hurt mixed with "Right" thrown togather with dislike and a dash of "Wrong".

It's a bittersweet moment when you feel like your falling apart, when your emotions are erratic and what you want and what you have are to oppisite things.

It's an oxymoron wihtin it's self, unable to meet it's self half way, counteracting all points of reason and sense.

It's a tiny moment in life when everything seems to big and you feel to small.

It's a feeling of defeat and loss, with victory and gain.

Just when you think you are lost in this havic emtions, your eyes open eyes are blinded by reality and everything throws itself togather in emotional fireworks, just to fade away into the night sky only perserved by your memory.


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Life is short. Less than half an eye blink, next to all eternity, if even that.

Posted: Apr 12, 2008

Author Comment:

So true!

heartbreak is a state where one is especially vulnerable, of course it will seem like the world had imploded in itself, but because of time, one realizes that once this state of living has passed, it is barely more than a memory.

Posted: Apr 20, 2008

Author Comment:

I know, that's exactly it, it's an emotion that's hard to put into words.



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