The stratus was in front- (5)
of me,the doves lagged and I (7)
was moving like the breeze (5)
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This is for B Leaf's challenge.
I was supposed to write a Haiku.
Haiku is a Japanese poem composed of three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five or more.
The words I was supposed to use were:
Stratus [continuous sheet of white cloud]
Doves
Breeze
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Submitted: Jul 7, 2008 Reads: 42 Comments: 6 Likes: 5
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That's really interesting!Good job. :)
Posted: Jul 9, 2008
I enjoyed reading this you did a great job. I hope that you enjoyed it and were able to maybe take a new outlook on your own writing and experimenting. Best Wishes thanks for taking the challenge Cheers.
Posted: Jul 9, 2008
haikus look simple but it's the hardest form of poem for me... you did a great job here:)
Posted: Jul 9, 2008
loved it! I like how you took three simple words and made a great poem! :) simple but lovely
Posted: Jul 11, 2008
Honestly Haikus r tough...
Honey, just reduce the font size so that they fall in one line ....and take off the numbers...
AWESOME attempt...One more feather in ur cap...CONGRATS...i am indeed proud of you....
Posted: Jul 11, 2008
Very nice.
A fantastic job with this.
Haikus are great.
Posted: Jul 13, 2008
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