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The fury of a woman spurned...

Poem By: Kritika
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This is for xxemoxbfsxx challenge---
I was supposed to write a poem using the words given to me which were:

1. lavender
2. scheming
3. tempestuous
4. persona
5. aroma
6. longevity
7. tendency
8. perspective


all kinds of comments are welcome.

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Submitted: Jun 29, 2008    Reads: 54    Comments: 3    Likes: 3   


Her lavender eyes seeked the source of the aroma
it was just like him....she just knew it

It was his persona which had attracted her towards him
initially ,when they had just met

He had changed her perspective of life
of love and of all things she had considered precious
-but that was before she had met him

He had this tendency--
to touch her face as gently as he could
as if he might hurt her

He had cared for her like no one else did
Scheming to please her whenever he could
always trying to prove
the longevity of his love for her

But it was not to be like this forever
He had left her
alone--to face the world without him
leaving her world as
tempestuous
as the worst storm the world had wittnessed as yet

No -she thought-they were wrong
the worst storm had yet to come

After all-"Nature hath no fury
like a woman spurned"


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Comments:

the end was shaky, but the rest, oh the rest was amazing.

L ♥

Posted: Jun 29, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks a lot!
and i guess i tried my best but still i'm glad that you liked it!!

Only these two lines confused me a bit....

"No -she thought-they were wrong
the worst storm had yet to come"

rest of the poem is marvellous...GOD bless u honey...u have got amazing talent...lemme know what u would like to choose for ur career?

Posted: Jun 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Uhm ithat line was supposed to mean that the world was wrong in believing that the storm which had come was very dangerouss because the "storm" she could create i.e. a woman who had been "dumped"....it was far more worse than this one!!

I hope it is clear now!!


And about my career?!!
Well don't be surprised if I say that I'm aiming to be an engineer!! =D

Lol

And thanks for your comments......they make my day!

Wonderful. Simply wonderful. You have a real talent for writing poetry. My favorite type of poetry is that that does not rhyme, so this was right up my alley, so to speak!

Posted: Jul 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Sakura.........and well i'm glad that you liked it......and i guess i don't have any favourites when it comes to rhyming,but in this poem i just was not able to think about any rhyme!

Thank you for your comment

LOL

~Kritika



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