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Give me power

Poem By: leavingreality
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Tags: emo, knife, life

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Submitted: Aug 16, 2008    Reads: 36    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   


Give me the strength to go through life,

And to not kill myself with the kitchen knife.

Show me the light.

so I wont drown myslef in my own blood.

Give me the power to not end my life now,

and to turn it upside down.

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:) It's a nice & sad poem, a bit short though....None the less I really enjoyed reading it.
Keeping trying there's always a light at the end of the tunnel....Even if you don't see it now. :)

Posted: Aug 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx so much..Yeh it was a bit short I will try and make it longer next time

xx



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