It comes best
when I sit here
words visit me
though none
would like to stay
and make it's sense
only now will
some rest themselves
on my mind
coming up with
these haphazard lines
it starts from here
then...it begins
the writing binge
of me
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Submitted: Apr 27, 2007 Reads: 54 Comments: 5 Likes: 0
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"The writing binge" awesome!
I hate it when the words are there, but I can't get them to make sense on the page. Just bugs me!
This is great, Leesah! It's very abstract, like interrupted thoughts. Really, really like it!
Posted: Apr 27, 2007
Me too-- :)
Posted: Apr 27, 2007
Good, let it flow...
Posted: Apr 27, 2007
Like it! A vortex of words blowing round the mind, just plucking certain ones out to write down - that's what I relate poetry to. Wonderful work :)
Posted: Apr 27, 2007
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