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Five hundred pass bys in your previous life,

For one exchange of glance in this life.

Nothing is a coincidence, but destiny.
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Submitted: Jul 27, 2008    Reads: 29    Comments: 5    Likes: 2   


Destiny is like an illegal drug,

For some unavoidable, for some impossible to seek out.

Mysterious yet lethal.

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A certain day, at a certain time, with a certain person, in a certain place, for a certain reason,

one would finally be aware,

in agony or laughter,

of being tricked by destiny.

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“Oh, sorry.”

One might say on the tube one day,

Only to lift ones head and become face to face with one’s Yr 3 teacher.

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Destiny is like a swimming costume,

Important, but often forgotten,

Until it becomes too late, and one is forced to say, “Oh damn! I can’t go swimming anymore!”

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“Look at her!”

One might be busily bullying someone at school some day,

Only to find in a length of time later, the same happening to oneselves.

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Destiny is like a stalker,

Knowing anything, anyone might be doing,

Like there are flowers blossoming some where on this Earth at this second.

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Destiny is like a meddling child,

playing with its toy like a ruthless ruler,

Unforgivable, yet always forgiven.


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Comments:

Wow, I really liked it. I liked how you put similes to Destiny. I really enjoyed reading this poem!

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you!^_^~~~

Loli:

Interesting treatment of "destiny", a most abstract concept. Imparting many capricious and irregular human traits to it.

Gave it an "I Like It" vote.

Will read your other postings. At times, casting "I Like It" votes without commenting.

Thank you for becoming a fan.

If you have not done so already, please read and rate my following postings entitled:

1. "Excitement Inspired",

2. "Our Grampa Ed",

3. "Love Intended: #1, #2 & #3",

4. "Limerick For Life",

5. "POEMS" &

6. "Here To Stay".

Again! Thank you!

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Posted: Jul 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Sure thing! I loved your poem as i said before, so am looking forward to reading your other writing!:)

O. u wrote a new poem. nice.

Posted: Jul 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks bff~~~

Destiny just loves playing tricks on us poor mortal no?
Great.
~Kaori

Posted: Jul 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for the comment Kaori!~~~

okay. I read it now. It's great. I like it when u described destiny like a meddling child. Its a great poem. I like it.

Posted: Aug 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks~



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