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Angel without Love

Poem By: LoveCicely
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About child abuse. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 27, 2008    Reads: 104    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


Do the fields of Yellow and Gold
Hold truths never to be told

She bows her head beneath the flowers
Sends heaven bound prayers to god

She begs forgiveness
For what she doesn’t know
What ever made her deserve this fate
The fate she must undergo

Her bruises and scars leave questions
These questions she leaves unanswered
Exposing the truth would go against god’s will
But god has long since left her

At only ten she doesn’t know
Whom she can trust
To whom she can go

She fears faulting and imperfection
Everything must be perfect to her daddy’s recollection
His belt makes her stronger
It makes her a “man”
But he seems to lash out whenever he can

Her heaven bound prayers don’t fly fast enough
Now she must be an angel
An angel without love

Love,

Cicely


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i love your poem, but no offense, this topic makes me sick. I hate people who could do that to their own child, or a child in general for that matter. i'm not one on fighting in the first place, i think it makes people look stupid and no matter what, even if you punch someone, that doesn't make you any less wrong. Bleh. Sorry, just thought i'd vent a little. This is one of those topics that just really pushes me over the limit. lol. oh well. what can you do, some people are just jerks and hit their kids. I just hope eventually maybe it wont happen anymore... such an idealistic fantasy.

Posted: May 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Your one to talk! Haha. After I read your short story, this seems....minimal!

ouch!
dat must hav been painful.....i just wish this doesn't happen to any child!!

Posted: Jun 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah...me too!



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