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Characteristics of a Corpse

Poetry By: mayigiveyoumyheart
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Tags: Sadness, Death


Um... I don't want to give anything away. But this is the mood I was in immediately after writing "Grateful I Loved You" so... read that one first, then read this one. The effect is great!


Submitted:Jun 16, 2008    Reads: 96    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


Hollow

Hurting

Resentful

Mourning

Tired

and empty.

Pessimistic,

rotting

a corpse on the outside.

Little more than that, in.

As I lie forever,

in my eternal bed.

...See?

I told you I was dead...





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