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Depression...

Poem By: moonwitch
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How depression feels to me when I am at my lowest. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Mar 23, 2008    Reads: 36    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


 
 
 
I am in a hole
A very deep
Dark hole
Above me
I see light
But I cannot reach
The light
 I am alone
No one cares
How long have I been?
In this hole
?
I cannot do this alone
I need help
Someone to help me
Get out of this hole
Where is everyone?
Why have they left me?
I feel so deserted
Please help me someone
Before the hole gets deeper
Before the light goes out
I am tired
I need to sleep
My eyes are closing
I can no longer try
I have lost
The light
Has
Gone
Out
?


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Irwin
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Another good one. I hope it's not personal. If you need a listening ear, use mine.

Posted: Mar 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for the kind offer. I have to admit it is personal but I am out of the hole now, so it's all good.

This is really good. I felt like that too, some time ago.
Good to hear you got out, too.

Posted: May 13, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you for the comment, I still go there sometimes but I find it easier to leave every time



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