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Submitted: Feb 14, 2008    Reads: 28    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


 
 
 
Hurtling down into
 The depths of despair
Of torment
 Self loathing
Spiralling
 Out of control
 No meaning left
To this existence
 Of mine
 Drowning
 In self pity
 No need to care
No care to need
No reason
 To smile,
 To laugh
 To speak
Watch life pass by
 No interest at all
Rain falling
 Like tears on
 My face
Black clouds
 Cover the sun
Just as depression
Shrouds my mood
 


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Irwin
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Oh dear! I hope this isn't about you. Well constructed poem and if it is about you then you have my biggest hug and a squeeze.

Posted: Feb 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much for the hug it was just what i needed.

Jayin the Energene
Jayin_the_Energene

This is a dark poem, but Ibet that you wrote it when you were depressed. I liked it though.

Posted: Feb 16, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you I have what I call dark times and writting helps me through them.



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