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This poem is not about my own experience, View table of contents...
Submitted: Mar 14, 2008 Reads: 26 Comments: 3 Likes: 2
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Good form, took us through the subjects restlessness and why it is so then suprised us with the last line which makes the whole poem change retrospectively. Well done.
Posted: Mar 14, 2008
Moonwitch I know of the experience you write of. It is a grief like any other.
Posted: Mar 14, 2008
Thelast line is sad.
Posted: Mar 14, 2008
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