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insomnia blues.

Poem By: moonwitch
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This poem is not about my own experience, View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Mar 14, 2008    Reads: 26    Comments: 3    Likes: 2   


 
 
Thoughts crashing through my head
Late at night when I lay in bed
 
Sleep won’t come to me at night
Although I try with all my might
 
I stare at the ceiling I stare at the floor
I can’t take this anymore
 
My life is ruled by insomnia blue
All of this caused by you
 
You left me on my own to weep
You took everything including sleep
 
I think of you all day long
Was it something I did wrong?
 
Why did you leave me why did you go?
I don’t think I will ever know
 
You left so suddenly without a word
My friends all rallied when they heard
 
From the world I need to hide
 I need to mourn my miscarried child.
 

 


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Irwin
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Good form, took us through the subjects restlessness and why it is so then suprised us with the last line which makes the whole poem change retrospectively. Well done.

Posted: Mar 14, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you I have not had much luck writing just lately so I am pleased you liked it

Moonwitch I know of the experience you write of. It is a grief like any other.

Posted: Mar 14, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you my sister had two miscarriages before she gave birth to a beautiful babay girl.

Thelast line is sad.

Posted: Mar 14, 2008

Author Comment:

yes it is a sad subject that affects so many lives. Thank you for reading and commenting.



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