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THE INDIAN HAIKU

Poem By: moonwitch
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A shot at a haiku ... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Mar 9, 2008    Reads: 20    Comments: 4    Likes: 2   


 
  
  
 

           
   The Indian squaw
Sat outside the red tepee
Feeding the baby
 
The Indian brave
Was sharpening his arrow
Ready for the hunt
 
The Indian braves
Went on a buffalo hunt
So the tribe could eat
 
The Indian chief
Smoked his pipe of peace
By the totem pole
 
 
 

 


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(SMILES) VERY GOOD moonwitch!!!!!!
first time at haiku? is fun isn't it?

Posted: Mar 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you, this isn't my first attempt but it is the longest.

Like this one. I'm cherokee so I love anything about
my ancestors.

Posted: Mar 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you I am so pleased that you like it, I have fascination about the Native American Indians I live on a boat named Sioux.

Most excellent quadraple Haiku!! Look forward to more!
RICKY.

Posted: Mar 14, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you very kind

How did I miss this??? And lovely Haiku at that!! A very nice write, Moon.....Jerry

Posted: Mar 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much Jerry I appreciate your comment.



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