The knife
Pierced her skin
A scarlet river
Flowed
Down
Her arm
She felt
Nothing,
She said
Nothing
Her arm
Was numb
So was
Her mind
But as long as
The blood flowed
She knew
She was alive.
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Submitted: Mar 23, 2008 Reads: 20 Comments: 3 Likes: 3
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Irwin
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Oh yes. Love this. My kind of poem. Well structured with a powerful ending
Posted: Mar 23, 2008
Sad how people CUT today for just feeling
Posted: Mar 24, 2008
strong stuff, Moon... It is sad that there are people who must live this way to feel alive. Well done.....Jerry
Posted: Mar 24, 2008
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