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When you left me I couldnt talk straight my sentences ran into each other no begining no end. View table of contents...
Submitted: Mar 9, 2008 Reads: 27 Comments: 3 Likes: 1
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Thats good feels like theres alot of your heart there. thanks for sharing this. good job
Posted: Mar 9, 2008
I really get that sense of being all choked up by this loss. Well done.
craaig
Posted: Mar 12, 2008
hi, i think you already know that i feel the same... i really understand the pain and emptiness... good poem!
Posted: Apr 27, 2008
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