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Poem By: moonwitch
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When you left me I couldnt talk straight my sentences ran into each other no begining no end. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Mar 9, 2008    Reads: 27    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   


 

 
I cried for you
 Left me when you
 Found someone new
 Romance you now have
I lost you for ever
 After all you said to me
 You loved me
 But now you love her
 Instead of loving me
 Why? Did you leave me?
Alone no one to love
You I always will
Love you that is…
 


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Comments:

Thats good feels like theres alot of your heart there. thanks for sharing this. good job

Posted: Mar 9, 2008

Author Comment:

THANK YOU FOR YOUR COMMENT

I really get that sense of being all choked up by this loss. Well done.
craaig

Posted: Mar 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.

hi, i think you already know that i feel the same... i really understand the pain and emptiness... good poem!

Posted: Apr 27, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you I appreciate it



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