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MY TASTE IS SWEET AND FRESH! !

Poem By: mum55
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Submitted: Feb 18, 2008    Reads: 47    Comments: 6    Likes: 4   


Please pick me up and buy me,
I am juicy and so big,
Squeeze me softly smell my skin,
Picked only yesterday,
My taste is sweet and fresh
 
I sit here on the shelf,
I have a round and shiny skin,
Yet know one seems
To want to buy me,
My taste is sweet and fresh,
 
Oh! Here comes a suitable candidate
Surely she will pick me up,
No she looks but leaves me
On this shelf I am doomed to stay
My taste is sweet and fresh,
 
Oh at last I am put in a basket
To the check out I do go,
I hope I please the purchaser
When she gets me home,
For My taste is sweet and fresh
Juicy once I am peeled
 
Or chopped and put in Orange
To make the taste buds fresh,
I can’t wait to loose my skin
And let my juices flow,
I am sure I will be the best
Sweet and Fresh Orange,
alt

My Master eats when She gets home!


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LOL, yes Juliet and when it warms up I will get some of those looks awfully good! hope you enjoy yours :) cute write, such fun* love and friendship...katie

Posted: Feb 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Hi Katie must say it was a really nice orange...hope your well and enjoying yourself......Glad you liked the verse.....Love peace your freind Juliet

Oranges are nice

Posted: Feb 18, 2008

Author Comment:

I so agree poewhit.....thanks for reading...til later Juliet

Good work Juliet!

Posted: Feb 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Brian hope your ok Til Later Juliet

There is no rhyme for the word ORANGE, so luckily you wrote free form!! LOL hehehe Cute and enjoyable read, Juliet.....Jerry

Posted: Feb 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Hi Jerry its amazing what happens when you eat a peace of fruit.....Happy days hope your well Juliet

what a great poem, loved it.
your friend
snow x

Posted: Feb 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Hi Snow glad you liked this had an orange and it sprang to mind hope your well Til Later take care Juliet

I really liked it.
it made me want an orange.LOL
keep up the good work

Razberry123

Posted: Feb 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankyou it was a nice orange! til later Juliet



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