Submitted: Jan 11, 2008
Reads: 52
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The rich, grow richer,
The poor get poorer,
This is the sadness of today,
Money goes to money, so they say,
Money is the source of evil,
When you have none
You want some,
When you have loads
You frizzle it away,
MONEY – MONEY - MONEY
Thoughts within everyday,
Nothing now is free,
Love even has a price you pay,
Broken hearts and shattered Dreams,
So as we go through life
We all pay a price,
For in the end that’s what life’s about
The different prices we all end up paying
At the end of the DAY
MONEY- LOVE-DEATH-JOY-PAIN-HEARACHE-STARVING-WAR-FOOD-
SALVATION-TERMINILLY ILL-HANDICAPPED-ALL MANKIND!
THEY ALL HAVE THEIR PRICE TO PAY!!!!
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The life could be easier , but you are right ! All have a price , even love . Money is bad , but i think religion is bad too.
You wrote a great poem , and i hope that everyone that read it think about your worlds . Great work!
Posted: Jan 11, 2008
loved this poem. i agree everything does have a price even love. i wish it were different.
take care
snowbelle
Posted: Jan 12, 2008
really liked this poem.......
Money goes to money, "the rich get rich the poor get poor" as someone once sang "Thats how it goes" its wrong but sadly this is world we have today.
There is always a price to pay, no such thing as a free lunch. Sometimes the price we pay is worth the expense...
Peace
Boneman
Posted: Jan 12, 2008
Delapsus Angelus
(not registered user)
I agree that part of life is what you pay for what you want and the other part is knowing whether it is worth the price. Sometimes you should have known better and other times you just roll the dice but yes, you keep on paying.
Posted: Jan 12, 2008
Hi Auntie .I am Gonna have to be the odd one out by saying.There is one thing in life that Is Free.
One Thing with many facets.Like a glistening jewel.
We are all Born with it.
We all share it.some are more sparse with it than others.
You can never loose it or have it taken from you.
It's unlimited .Immortal.The more you give it away the more you have.
A few examples of the top of my head!
It's the glint in eyes of the new born.
It's the beat of a heart.
Its the overwhelming compassion one has to a stranger who Is Injured or in need.
It's the Feeling of abundance when you are truly grateful for God's gift of life.
It's To truly understand That the part you play in life is part of a bigger picture.
It's the power to let go of everything you cherish.Knowing That you are still one.even when parted by death.
It Is UNCONDITIONAL ..IT IS UNCONDITIONAL LOVE
beware of bargain and Falsities.
For the best things in life are Truly free.
xxx
Posted: Jan 27, 2008
