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Submitted: Jun 24, 2008    Reads: 71    Comments: 7    Likes: 2   


Going on dancing and laughing againFor I might never get a second chanceEnjoying the very last moments of life…
Cherishing every bit of it with love
Never wishing those moments to goNor to let go of them while I leave
Bidding good-bye to all beloved people
Bringing tears to one’s eyes…While the reason being only me
Though I never wanted to be the reason
So am I touched…to see the loveBut sorrowful to leave them all
My last wish…never let your tears to fall
While I’m gone…for good…for ever…But save them to shed while you’re happy…


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i really enjoyed this . i will look in again

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you :)

thanks. i hope you'll enjoy the others too :)

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

You touched me yet again with you way with words. You really do have a talent! ^^

Posted: Jun 29, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks!! :D

(A)...hehe...thank you so much!

Posted: Jun 29, 2008

I think this is my favorite of all your poems that I've read so far. It was so beautiful, and the sentiment it expresses is really touching. One typo: in the 3rd stanza "biding" should be "bidding." But otherwise a wonderful poem!

Stephanee :)

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Author Comment:

really??! Wow!! Thank you soooo mcuh!!!
I'd correct it right away!

Glad you liked it!! ^_^

Nice poem :}

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks..!!XD

this poem is great i think i'll become one of your fans! can't wait to read more!!

Posted: Sep 26, 2008

Author Comment:

WOW!!!*grinning wiiide*
Thanks a lot!!XD



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