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Submitted: Jun 24, 2008
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Going on dancing and laughing againFor I might never get a second chanceEnjoying the very last moments of life…
Cherishing every bit of it with loveNever wishing those moments to goNor to let go of them while I leave
Bidding good-bye to all beloved peopleBringing tears to one’s eyes…While the reason being only me
Though I never wanted to be the reasonSo am I touched…to see the loveBut sorrowful to leave them all
My last wish…never let your tears to fallWhile I’m gone…for good…for ever…But save them to shed while you’re happy…
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Comments:
i really enjoyed this . i will look in again
Posted: Jun 25, 2008
thanks. i hope you'll enjoy the others too :)
Posted: Jun 25, 2008
You touched me yet again with you way with words. You really do have a talent! ^^
Posted: Jun 29, 2008
(A)...hehe...thank you so much!
Posted: Jun 29, 2008
I think this is my favorite of all your poems that I've read so far. It was so beautiful, and the sentiment it expresses is really touching. One typo: in the 3rd stanza "biding" should be "bidding." But otherwise a wonderful poem!
Stephanee :)
Posted: Jul 29, 2008
Nice poem :}
Posted: Aug 12, 2008
this poem is great i think i'll become one of your fans! can't wait to read more!!
Posted: Sep 26, 2008
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