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Just a short poem I wrote at school two years ago about the greatest city in the world!!!! View table of contents...
Submitted: May 14, 2007 Reads: 74 Comments: 9 Likes: 0
London
The city full of happiness
The city full of madness
The city full of loudness
London
The best multicultured city
Different colours everywhere you see
For example you and me
London
Plenty of shops and sites
Full of excitement every night
In the dark, London's always bright
London
You have so much in store
The city I adore
So give me more, more, more.
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I have been to London for love twice in the last year... her and I didnt work... a few issues with her ex... but London... OMG... I am working on returning myself to live there within the next year... please read "The London Discovery's" for my take on things
Posted: May 14, 2007
Ha! Aw, thats quite sweet. I actually live in London and it's ok. London would be great if not for all the people...
Its kind of like a little 'ode', very imaginative. Nice work.
Posted: May 14, 2007
Olola:
More persuasive tribute to the City of London. Should be most popular among Londoners. I can see many magazines wanting to print this.
Happy trails,
Ed Bradley.
Posted: May 18, 2007
I was born in London, and you have captured my city well and imaginatively. Most enjoyable.
Posted: Jul 17, 2007
personally i think london sucks. its ok, i live there ^_^
its a nice piece. ^_^
Posted: Jul 23, 2007
Yes this is nice.
Posted: Feb 10, 2008
you're are definately lucky to live in such a beautiful place. My friend Carla actually just came back from a trip from there. Her pictures are gorgeous and I can't wait to go next year woohoooo!
Great job on capturing the city, it makes me even more anxious to go!
Steph:)
Posted: Mar 23, 2008
I only ever passed through Heathrow airport 3 times on my route to Australia, never got to see London but hope to someday as I have relatives there. You promote your city well here my friend.
Posted: Mar 24, 2008
Different colours everywhere you see
For example you and me
I wish I have money to go there at least once in this life....ur writing inspired me....
City of madness...wish i could also experience...
Posted: Apr 20, 2008
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