poem i wrote for the challenge by Hugs and Kisses. I had to use the words gree, woven, sauce, napkin, and maple, which are underlined. it isn't the greatest, but i had never heard the song before, and i just wrote what popped into my head. hope u don't think it's too bad!! View table of contents...

Submitted: Jul 28, 2008    Reads: 22    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   

As he sings, his green eyes sparkle

His gaze woven into mine

His voice sweet as maple sugar

As he sings of how lucky he is

To have me, and I wish for a napkin

To wipe my wet eyes

But when he says I need a cuter jersey

For our soccer team

I can't help but think

That this guy

Is better than sweet and sour sauce

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Hugs and kisses

Aww it was sweet. lol I'm totally going to use that "your better than sweet and sour sauce" that's a pretty awesome line. You did well for the challenge! Good job!

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

haha, i couldn't think of any other word to go with sauce, so i just put a random line in their.

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