it's never too late

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Poem By: princess onika auguste
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Tags: song, never, too, late, love

this just a song about it's never too late to make a relationship work View table of contents...

Submitted: Dec 14, 2007 Reads: 92 Comments: 10 Likes: 3

sometimes it feels like it's over

i know you think your love for me has died

and now you think we should part

but baby just give ud time

cuz

chorus

it's never too late

to fall back in love

it's never too late

for those feelings to return

baby if yoy remember those good times we shared

you'll see it's never too late

baby we belong together

oh yeah

baby we fell in love at first sight

please don't leave

our love was strong

and now you telling me you want to move on

but baby you can't just remember

those long times we spend making love

remember those nights we spent looking at the stars

baby i know you still love me

and i'm going to remind you that's never too late

chorus

bridge

we cuss

we fight

we yell at each other

you may think that's reason enough to leave

but baby don't you know i love you

and i'm not going to let you leave

baby just try to see ..............

chorus

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Comments:

Nixie

This could make a great song, do you have music to it? ~ Nixie

Posted: Jan 10, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks but i don't have the music infact i have no idea how to write music do you? all i know is to write lyrics

apodiform

Yes, I could hear the rhythm in my head as I was reading it!

Posted: Apr 7, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks very much

Hey !! It sounded so real. I liked it, honestly because like you I am a die hard romantic at heart and will anythinf for love.
I liked the rhythm, though the highlight made it little difficult to read.

Posted: Apr 7, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks very much

GypsyRose

Aw, I like this a lot. I could hear it playing in my head as I read it. Lovely! ~ Gypsy

Posted: May 2, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you very much

Pratibha

This one is in my list for the BOOKSIE FAMILY but i am not able to update Chapter 3.....*SAD*

Posted: May 11, 2008

Author Comment:

ok don't worry it will be updated

indiefreak

The song's very sweet...

Posted: May 20, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you

EdwardJBradleySr

princess onika auguste:

Could not read this because the choice of colors. Light yellow print on a light blue background doesn't provide my eyes with enough contrast.

Gave it an "I Like It" vote. Based, largely, upon the comments of others.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Posted: Jul 19, 2008