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i choce the colour yello coz im mellow hehe and i choce to get given 5 words they are........
1.zoo
2.pencil
3.fan
4.spanish
5.hamster View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 21, 2008    Reads: 32    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


O.k readers this is not a poem at all really hehe just me trying out some comedy...

The colour yellow reminds me of the time I went to the zoo,

The sun was out, the sky was blue, and I was only two

There was a Spanish speaking hamster named Lester, who lived at the zoo.

He was world famous too,

All the people, came from everywhere that day, just to hear Lester say

"Once upon a time I was a man, with a wife and children and a bakery stand, My bread was being eaten by something so small so I set a trap, to put it to a end, The trap went off, sounded like a shot, so I had a look and what did I see? I saw a Hamster named Larry Half dead in the trap, Larry had a family, even a pet rat, 'what have you done?' I heard a little voice, It came from his wife named Louis, Larry was dying stuck in his trap, before his last breath he said just this: I was once a man with a wife and a dog, I killed a hamster named Leopold, Leopold was a god, and turned me in to this, and I shall do the same to you, I now grant you...worthless "

My pencil dropped from my hand as Lester walked off the stand, no one even clapped there hands

And that was the time I went to the zoo when I was only two.

-o.k yeh this is sooooooooooooooooo so so lame i know but meh i dont really care tell me what you think!! he he ciao!


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Comments:

LOL! This was funny! I like funny poems. You rhymed it and everything, great job! It's not lame by the way! :P

Posted: Aug 23, 2008

Author Comment:

haha kinda is lame but im glad you think its funny its rather eccentric i thought just like me hehe ciao!!



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