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Submitted: Jul 1, 2008 Reads: 44 Comments: 7 Likes: 3
Cat fights,
star light,
midnight,
fog.
shillouetes,
sleeping heads,
ticking clocks,
frozen scenes,
caffeine,
dead dreams,
R.E.M.
And then theres me;
Wide awake,
late,
blinking eyes,
a snake.
cardboard cutouts,
head phones,
chopsticks,
glitter,
celotape,
And ever maddening each hour I am awake.
alrighty yeah ok this is the most strangest weirdest bizzarest maddest peom ever in the history of me.
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It is pretty strange, but I like it. Great job!
Posted: Jul 3, 2008
You're interesting. I have lots of trouble sleeping myself. No chopsticks though or glitter. Other things ya know, night owl syndrome, hehe. Another one of yours that rings a bell with me. I like your content choices so far.
Posted: Jul 4, 2008
Not the normal but I still liked it.Kinda reminded me od Dr.Seuss.It's still cool and different but that's what it's about right?
Posted: Aug 4, 2008
I really like this, and I think it's awesome...it may seem a little bizarre or strange, but that is a good thing-I like it cuz it's so creative, with the short lines being complete visuals, and my overall idea of what it's about is Insomnia, which I also have, so anyways, great work...keep writing this stuff-me like ;)
*Meg*
Posted: Aug 14, 2008
Different and absorbing but better still it gives me an insight in to your inner thoughts keep up the good work Bd 8/10 for starters
Posted: Aug 20, 2008
I actually liked the first half of the poem; when I was writing Regular Night, my poem, I felt a lot like it. Good poem, everyone writes one or two bizarre poem(s) in his/her life.
Posted: Sep 10, 2008
Strange is good! that makes me think of the nights of insomnia I've had...only yours sounds a little nicer, lol
Posted: Sep 10, 2008
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