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My hands...! Stay with me

Poetry By: reemoOka

kind of short story..Hope you like it :)

Submitted:Aug 18, 2011    Reads: 51    Comments: 10    Likes: 3   

My hands

My best friend..!

You wipe my tears when I cry..!

You blame me when I'm wrong

You protect me, You save me

You make me independent

Don't need others help

You r unique, You r unique my hands!!!

No one knows how bless You are!


I do…!

I do my hands

Stay with me my hands

Don't go

Don't let them take you

Don't listen to them

I do love you!!

I do care of you!!

U will be ok with me


Why you are dry!!!

Why you are going to die!!!

Where's the blood?

Maybe I need more apples

Believe me, I need more apples

More apples equal more blood

That's the problem

Don't listen to them

Certainly the blood will return!!

Why wouldn't it!!

Don't listen to them

They are just sick hopeless people

We are not!

You are just not ok

You will be ok!!

I will not letu go

I won't give up

We won't give up my hands

My body can't take you anymore!

My body wants to let you go

My body betrayed you

Betrayed us

It took the blood from you

It killed you

Killed me with you

Promise me

Promise me my hands

That you will never let me alone

Promise me that you will take me with uyou

Where ever you go!

And I promise you

I promise you my hands

I promise that I will not let you go alone!!

I will take my soul from this body

And leave with you

We will continue our journey together

My soul and you

With no deceit

Go on doctors

Go on sick people

Take my hands off

Take them away


Don't try to wake me up

Coz I won't

I'm going

I'm going with my hands

And let my body for you

It's a bad thing

And trust me

Only bad things deserve to stay

To stay in this life

My body





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