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Baby Daniel

Poem By: RWhitewings
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My best friends nepthew was born premture and unfortunatly didn't make it. By the time my friend got to the hospital he had already passed on and my friend held him her arms that once and this poem is about that moment. About Daniel about how he left his mark on us even though i never saw him. This is Daniel's poem. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Sep 3, 2008    Reads: 37    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


Baby Daniel

Precious little one

So much promise held in that tiny bud of your hand

Endless potential so much more than mine

But this world was far too cruel for such a delicate flower

So God took you into his Eden

And there you bloom more beautiful than we could ever be

Although I am sad that we can never be together

I have known you

In that instant

When I held you in my arms

 I saw heaven in your perfection

As you appeared merely to slumber

You were one among millions

A tiny star among the thousands of sparkling jewels in the sky

But you shined the brightest

The world may forget you

But we shall always remember

The beautiful baby angel

Who is forever in our hearts

And emblazoned in minds

Forever...

Rachel White


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Speechless...
I'm pretty lost for words now, even for publishing my own writings, and it appears I am in comments to =(
I'll come back soon to put in a well worded comment. Although first I would like to say I'm sorry that this happened. Not even being able to open his eyes..
The poem itself is great, but the inspiration behind it is heartbreaking. Nicely written...

Posted: Sep 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much (i know the feeling when loosing word it's an aggravating exprience and i hope it passes for you soon because it can driver a writer crazy). Daniels sotry is a sad one indeed i cried writing it and i cried reading it after. But he's in a better place now.

john
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i understand how it feels to lose a baby cuz i lost a still born this past year. this poem reminded me of my baby boy his name was jurnee,that would of been his name. This poem really reminded of my baby boy. it made me drop a couple of tears.

Posted: Sep 6, 2008

Author Comment:

i'm so sorry for your loss. I can't think of anything worse than having a child taken from this earth so young.thank you for taking the time to comment I really appricate it.xx



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