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Submitted: Jul 6, 2008 Reads: 23 Comments: 4 Likes: 1
Its Not Okay
.
I finally found
love sucks!
.
It encases you in warmth
you believe everything love tells you
It blinds you in a false sense of hope
It sugar coats lies,
don't believe
.
The end always hurts,
but love pains me even more
.
Love kills...
Your heart slowly
.
Love
it's too
painful
.
It's not shy to give you
comfort
then tear it out from underneath you
.
As you give your heart away
it just kills you
a little bit
each time
.
My advice...
DONT FALL IN LOVE
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I helped. hehe.
L ♥
Posted: Jul 7, 2008
you're right. love does seriously hurt. i like the way you put it all together though :)
Posted: Jul 7, 2008
yes i agree....love is painful esp if it is not reciprocated the way we wnated and when we give too much in a relation...i am telling this out of my experience...
Posted: Jul 12, 2008
very true, but it can also be beautiful. Great poem, you really expressed yourself well :P
Steph(:
Posted: Jul 13, 2008
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