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Make Me Whole.

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Submitted: Jul 16, 2008    Reads: 35    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   

Make Me Whole

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1,000 milles away,

I follow you in pieces,

Make me whole.

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Punishment

Very short and poignant sarah ^^
Good job.

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

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lol, thx.... poignant????????? ?_? lol, thanks for reading.

Taylor Emilie

i love it sarah

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

Author Comment:

thx

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