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Submitted: Jun 16, 2008 Reads: 34 Comments: 3 Likes: 1
Sadness clouds my eyes, It usually starts with a lie, It makes me want to die, But someone comes to help pass the time.
When they leave, I go back to the grief, I stare at a floating leaf, Then I start to think.
People enjoy bringing me down but I look around, As I fall to the ground, I die with no sound.
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Wow, so sad. I really liked it. Even though it was kinda short, it was still full of emotion. Grea poem. =D
Posted: Jun 16, 2008
Shelby, Well written, and very expressive. When I read this poem I felt the sadness of your soul, and the heart of me wanted so badly to hug you.
I'm sending lots of hugs your way and I hope and pray you accept them.
Posted: Jun 17, 2008
this is sad but good. it makes you wnat to read more. and i like how yuo express your feelings in this so well. good job!!!!!
~Lemon
Posted: Jun 17, 2008
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