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Poem By: solafidas
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thoughts of being unhappy with where one is but not willing to change View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 14, 2008    Reads: 44    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   


you can find me in the shadows, i'd come out into the light but i think either the lights have all burnt out or i just can'tfind the switch

maybe you can find it for me. you have'nt been here that long, it might be easier.

this room kinda grows on you after awhile. i particularly like this corner. it's a little dusty and unused but i find myself sitting here for hours

i had forgotten how worn down the floor had become... small feet in the stone... but then i wouldn't be alone here.

i think im lost, ive thought that for some time... i keep telling myself i'll look for me tomorow,i just keep forgetting.

I saw this cage once, nothing in it, just sitting empty there on the floor.i walked all the way around...looking out through the bars, but just empty.

sometimes i can still see the lights, if i close my eyes real tight... it hurts, but i can see them. just a little.

hello? hmmm i thought that you were right here by my side, but then ive allways been alone. havent i?

i found a key yesterday, for a door ive been trying to open. now that i know its locked im not so sure i want to open it.

what if i locked it for a reason and i dont want to see whats inside...but maybe im inside

i should probably get back... to something... what was? where am i?


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Comments:

great great.... i can totally relate to your poetry.....:) keep writing

Posted: Jul 19, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you:)!! im quite speachless... im sure ill have more up soon

this one really hit home for me
"i think im lost, ive thought that for some time... i keep telling myself i'll look for me tomorow,i just keep forgetting."

Posted: Aug 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you:) i am glad you like it!:)

Funny, clever, so true.......

loosing oneself can be so much fun..

Posted: Sep 5, 2008

Author Comment:

ha that made me smile:) yes it can. tahnk you:)



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