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Submitted: Oct 9, 2008    Reads: 70    Comments: 6    Likes: 4   


As One

A lonesome wanderer was i

Before he crossed my path one day

Two halves of a whole were we

Two strangers who met by destiny

Everything in the world made sense

All trees looked greener

The rain more bountiful

When we shared our iman

And we shared our brains and minds

My knowledge grew

My happiness blossomed

Fresh earth opened up

To welcome

Nothing was a blur no more

Nothing was I unsure about

Any question was answered

Even before leaving my lips

Any wish was fulfilled

Before wishing it

I always saw the stars in the sky

He taught me why they were high

Even as strangers the world could see

That we were meant to be

Living the world

As one

Person of my dreams

Come to me


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Comments:

awww! I rlly like it =] Its rlly cute. ^.^ ♥♥

Posted: Oct 9, 2008

I REALLY liked the imagery you used. I found it very easy and pleasing to read. VERY well writ. Good Job yo

Posted: Oct 9, 2008

it sounds like a poem that summaries the whole book that am reading right now... lol..

i actually like it... the poem..
. gReaT! tell me more when you have more poems out...
i would love to read.. =]

.x peace

Posted: Oct 9, 2008

it is sooo inspiring, sonia! great work, here. i love the way u write the poem, cause it touches on the details. may i ask, do u mean he/He as ALLAH or our prophet, Muhammad S.A.W.?

Posted: Oct 10, 2008

alice
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wow that was really nice i wonder if its a person to whom uv directed this poem to. if u have then there a lucky person because u can feel the emotion touch u from this poem.

Posted: Oct 25, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks!

Waqar
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On a night so flawless, my eyes seek a star
My hand extends to touch to reach afar
Though unphysical the touch my heart begins to race
Afraid to let go..
Afraid to lose pace..
Only wishing upon the star to appreciate the rush
I don’t wish to blemish, I just wish to touch
Hoping upon a connection to link our souls
Join our inner selves, open our eyes and become whole

Posted: Nov 5, 2008



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