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Submitted: Jul 4, 2008 Reads: 59 Comments: 2 Likes: 1
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I thought it was interesting when I read "the cage", but I think this is just wrong...I am a mother of a seventeen-month-old daughter, so this creeps me out in a really bad way...I know it is just a poem and u are creating a horror story, but I don't approve of the content...I usually don't critcize negatively and never judge anyone here at booksie, but I think this one is really bad! So if you respond to my messages, I will just let it be...but I don't think I care to read anymore of your works, cuz this took me down a road I didn't want to go down....sorry, please help yourself.
Posted: Jul 7, 2008
Very VERY sad, but I wouldn't go as far as to say I'd never look at your poems again. I understand what you were saying, that when you write you try to place yourself in someone else's shoes, and that's exactly what I do too. I don't actually experience what I write, although people may think I have experienced the subject I write about. This poem was a completely different style, but I think you did a great job at it! You created a depressing darkness in a very unique way. Don' let others stop you from continuing to write more like this one. =)
~Maple
Posted: Jul 14, 2008
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