Hurricane and storm

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Poem By: sonia
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Tags: destruction, disease, rain, pain, wet

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Submitted: Aug 18, 2008 Reads: 54 Comments: 6 Likes: 3

hurricane

i let you take me there

let me be engulfed in the air

to mix and merge

and the hurricane sweeps

take the air, twist it there

bend it there, tame it there

together we catch the trees

we catch houses and homes

even people in chairs

and i pour down

a shallow shower

hurricanse destructs the town

take me down

hear them drown

floods and winds

transforming everything

screams and moans

whispers and pleas

dont let it stop

dont let it end

let the frame-freeze

a work of art

a masterpeice

the destruction

is the disease

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Comments:

poewhit

There is a beauty in the power of storms

Posted: Aug 18, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks!

puddleofink

wow the rawness of the storm sounds so beautiful because of you i like this alot!

Posted: Aug 18, 2008

Author Comment:

ok thanks! great

Ant

Powerful.. does show the fury of the storms and with that, the destruction and chaos that they bring. Great job =D

Posted: Aug 18, 2008

Wow sonia :) This is a unique and lovely piece of art. We need more poems like this. The last four lines really *made* me fall in love with this one. I look forward to new stuff from you :) Take care, Regan

Posted: Aug 22, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks regan as always :D

MAmberConrad

It feels like rain to me.
I love your style of poetry, how you bare your soul into it. In some instances, when someone repeats a line, I find it redundant. In your case, I think it reflects even more a spiritual plane. This is one of my favorites now.

MA

Posted: Sep 6, 2008