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Submitted: Jul 6, 2008 Reads: 49 Comments: 4 Likes: 1
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I was a victim when an intruder broke in a killed my boyfriend 3 years ago, I hid and you have put into words how I felt waiting to die..I was at his home and the killer had mental illness..your poem opened the door again.. not an insult.. just captured the feeling great poem..chow olwen
Posted: Jul 7, 2008
It was very good I could really feel what you were trying to say.
I like the pic you used for the poem.
Posted: Jul 13, 2008
i like it keep up the good work
Posted: Jul 14, 2008
Great descriptiveness, love to read more of your writing! Keep it up, wonderful writing you create! =)
~Mapel
Posted: Jul 26, 2008
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