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Submitted: Jul 6, 2008    Reads: 49    Comments: 4    Likes: 1   


Mouse to a cat
 
I feel the emotions surge
Beneath very folds of my skin
I can feel my blood boil
I can feel my head freeze
The complex mix
Of the emotional fix
Is tearing at my soul
Piece by piece
 
My eyes burn
My head spins
My heart races
And stops,
And tick-tock’s
Tick-tock
 
I feel helpless
And hopeless
Awaiting my doom
That may never come
Or may be on its way
 
I’m a mouse to the cat
I Never know if the cats waiting
I Never know if the cats wanting
Always feeling,
Fearing,
The Anger
The pain
 
I feel free, but locked up
Loose but tight,
Smooth but rough,
 
Black but white
But white
But white
 


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Comments:

I was a victim when an intruder broke in a killed my boyfriend 3 years ago, I hid and you have put into words how I felt waiting to die..I was at his home and the killer had mental illness..your poem opened the door again.. not an insult.. just captured the feeling great poem..chow olwen

Posted: Jul 7, 2008

Author Comment:

im so sorry to hear that Olwen...that must have been a very traumatic experience for you, i'm touched that you related your emotions during that trajic moment in my words..i hope i can continue to do the same in the future.

im my poetry i try to capture different emotions, and try to write the world in different realities...

anyway, thanks for reading Olwen!

It was very good I could really feel what you were trying to say.
I like the pic you used for the poem.

Posted: Jul 13, 2008

Author Comment:

thnkyou!

i like it keep up the good work

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

THANKS!

Great descriptiveness, love to read more of your writing! Keep it up, wonderful writing you create! =)
~Mapel

Posted: Jul 26, 2008



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