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ok i wrote this poem when i was 9 years old, i don't remeber why i wrote it or wht made me write it, it was the first poem i ever wrote... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 14, 2008    Reads: 52    Comments: 4    Likes: 0   


Pain
 
Although my heart beats
Pain is always there
Only to be heard by
Someone who will care
 
Everything is not the same
Like how used to be
I have no friends I’m lonely now
Because everyone ignores me
 
Pain never goes it stays there
Like the eternity of a scar
The pain is burning brightly inside me
So bright like the brightness of a star
 
The thing that I have learnt in life
Is that pain will never go
It only sinks deeper into your heart
Only then it will be too late to know


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wowzers! haha great emotion for being 9 years old when you wrote this! I actually found that some of my best poems I also wrote at a young age. I recently found them and was like WOWO!! haha that must have been your reaction when you saw this poem...it is really great! :)

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL THANKS! i ges i was a bit shocked now that i think a 9 year old wrote it!

awww, it's oky if you ever need to talk i'm here.

L ♥

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

lol

you wrote this when you were 9!? woah, this is reall good for a 9 year old. the first stanza is awsome.........9..............i cant seem to get over that.....lol.
~Lemon

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

lol i actually jus realised i wer 8!! thanks!!

Umar Y
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nice poem 4 a 9yr old...a wo 2 busy playin n messin rwnd 2 b rytin poems lol gud 1 tho

Posted: Jul 16, 2008

Author Comment:

l0l, i wrote it for english class in year 5..



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