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Submitted: Jul 26, 2008    Reads: 62    Comments: 5    Likes: 1   


Stranger
 
I thought of you Everyday
Everyday I thought of you
Your smile, your words, your voice
The voice I haven’t heard for so long
The words I never got from you.
Even memories are not there anymore
how do I know I love you?
I try to think of you again
And again and again and again
But you make my heart ache
You made it try too hard
Try so hard, to love you
What is love anyway?
I try to see the future
But you’re not even at my present
You haven’t left me
But you’re not with me
You have me over the cliff,
Not letting go or holding on tight
You won’t let me fall
But you won’t hold me either
I’m dangling on life’s edge
How can I bang on your door?
And make you talk
When you speak through those bars
Behind locks and chains
With silent words
And speechless quotes
How do I know you love me?
You messengers speak of your love for me
You live and die for me
If it was true, would you be doing this at all?
You are clever to pronounce your love
To advertise it as so,
So when it falls off
When it’s gone
You wouldn’t be to blame
I don’t know if this time was wasted
Or time spent well
But my start was you
And my end is you
No matter what
If you will come,
Please.
Come back


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Comments:

Hey Sonia :) I know what this feels like and I can definitely vouch for its effects. You added real artistry into your expression here and I really enjoyed it. The sad quality of this poem is outreaching and it really lends to the artistry. I love it! Regan

Posted: Jul 26, 2008

alice
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wow that was amazing, i think that was ur best poem keep it up

Posted: Jul 27, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks!

Interesting indeed. Not Bad...its great.. keep it up.

Posted: Aug 14, 2008

very intense and a pleasure to read , you are one very talented lady .

Posted: Sep 5, 2008

Author Comment:

thankyou so much!

So intense...I like it.

Posted: Sep 5, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks!



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