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Submitted: Jul 3, 2008 Reads: 41 Comments: 4 Likes: 1
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beautiful. and i don't think you're a liar, betrayer or deceiver at all lol :P but its an interesting poem. love it!
Posted: Jul 3, 2008
this is really good. I love it! the rhyming is great, the flow is wonderful...BRAVO!
Posted: Jul 3, 2008
Yah! This was great!!!! I love the first paragraph!!!!!
Keep on writing!
Posted: Jul 18, 2008
First and last stanza was the best, good work.
Posted: Aug 20, 2008
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