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To see beyond the seen

Poem By: sonia
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a complex of relationships View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 3, 2008    Reads: 41    Comments: 4    Likes: 1   


To see beyond the seen…
 
I see you as my equal, as my blood
You see me as your opponent
I see you as my future, friend close to my heart
You see me as your bitter present
I see you as blossom from which you can grow
You see me as a threat you wish to overthrow
 
Oh you! My beloved I see you as my life itself
You see me as your past, which wont remain as so
I see you! As my breaths as my steps as my soul
You see me as the pain you are trying to forget
I see you as my fountain of smiles and laughter
You see me as your doom and disaster
 
You! Oh lovely group of people I see you as my friends
You see me as wanderer, a drifter
I see you as those I share my joys to
You see me as the one to be superficial to
I see you whom I want to make strong bonds with
But to you I’m just ‘the girl we know’
 
I see you the origin of my journey
You see me as a liar, betrayer, a deceiver
I feel I owe you the world for you gave me the world
You feel that there’s always something beneath the above
I see you as my values and my love…
 
My love..
 
My love….
 
          My love…..


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Comments:

beautiful. and i don't think you're a liar, betrayer or deceiver at all lol :P but its an interesting poem. love it!

Posted: Jul 3, 2008

Author Comment:

hey! thankyou, lol tht is the only poem i wrote thi year!

this is really good. I love it! the rhyming is great, the flow is wonderful...BRAVO!

Posted: Jul 3, 2008

Author Comment:

wow thankyou!

Yah! This was great!!!! I love the first paragraph!!!!!
Keep on writing!

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

THANKS!

First and last stanza was the best, good work.

Posted: Aug 20, 2008



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