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Submitted: Jul 5, 2008    Reads: 42    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   


Depressed tunes
 
i’m more hopeless than a failure
Everybody gives me a lecture
I know the drill every feature
I am just a dunce creature
 
It doesn’t mean I don’t try
I always end everyday with a cry
Sometimes I wish I could fly
Away from everything up in the sky
 
I wish everyone would just leave me
That they would listen and believe me
I wish I could just let them see
How hard it is to be me
 
I never thought I’d be in this state
So bad I can’t change my fate
But in the end its way to late
Av got far too much on my plate
 


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Actually its not that bad, i liked it. (mainly coz it rhymed.. but also coz it makes sense and not psychopathic..lol.) gud 1

Posted: Aug 20, 2008



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