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Vultures

Poem By: sonia
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Submitted: Aug 15, 2008    Reads: 41    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


a selfish vulture

took all the feed

even ate

the dead friends neck

feathers aside, red ooze

pink flesh, still warm

it did not matter

the dead remains

would not awaken

and tear at the vultures soul

it did

it thought

with another snap

another bite

a chunk of meat

with red gravy

a pecice of breast

ribcage exposed

torn bits

of flesh and meat

of little bits

would not regrow

nor be replaced


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alice
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where the heck do u get these ideas from lol

Posted: Aug 16, 2008

Author Comment:

lol

Great descriptancy.... Oh Sonia yet another great idea for a poem. I agree with the previous comment, where do you generate all these wonderful ideas??? I still have many years to learn I guess.... =)
~Maple

Posted: Sep 5, 2008

Author Comment:

lol, thanks maple , ur comments are always so motivating!:D



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