
Random First Lines: I see you. You have not seen me, yet. I wait for you out of sight, knowing you will come to me soon. When you... : Thrillers » Read
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Submitted: Jul 4, 2008 Reads: 45 Comments: 4 Likes: 1
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i think u need help
Posted: Jul 4, 2008
interesting, but is this supposed to be a funny poem or sad poem?
Posted: Jul 18, 2008
That's very good! I loved the words "bloodcurdling scream," it is very descriptive and to me it describes perfectly of what a high pitched scream would be. Great work, can't wait to read more of your works! =)
~Maple
Posted: Jul 26, 2008
Great poem... i like the rhymes...another psychopathic poem
Posted: Aug 14, 2008
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