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Poem By: speedofdeath
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Tags: pain, cutting, cut, hate, emo, regret, razor, sad, dark, depressed, bleed, suicide, hurt, death, poetry

this is a poem i wrote about a problem me and a lot of my friends have. View table of contents...

Submitted: Nov 14, 2007 Reads: 102 Comments: 4 Likes: 3

when the blood falls like tears,

when the blade takes all my fears,

when i am falling so fast i cant think,

and i hit the ground before i can blink,

becouse the pain became too much,

i let it go in such a rush,

i forgot to say goodbye,

or even provide a reason why,

with all this hate and pain and fear,

i never allowed anyone to come near,

so now i pray to the divine to save me,

becouse now i realize: i am not ready.

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Comments:

mum55

I enjoyed reading this well done Juliet

Posted: Nov 16, 2007

Mix
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you put into words what i wasn't sure was real. you placed feellings that i know so well inot a poem that touches the soul.

wonderful.
Mix

Posted: Nov 17, 2007

ROXY
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i liked reading ur poem its full of the intense reaity

Posted: Nov 23, 2007

Bobbie
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I understand what this poem is about. I have a 16 year old who used to be a cutter. now since really seeing the light she hasn't done it anymore. Thanx

Posted: Nov 30, 2007