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My last/My prison

Poem By: Sweetness
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well when i was writing this i was contemplating suicide,i was lost.it was acouple of years back.now im passed what happend and iv moved on but the memmories remain.enjoy

ps-there are no capital letters because the small letters show insagnificans,pls leave your input sothat i may improve.
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Submitted: Aug 25, 2008    Reads: 63    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


you tried to help me,but i don't see any exit.

no escape

from this prison I'm in.

no bright white light at the end of the tunnel.

it neverends and it forces me on this never- ending journey.

the world outside me is collapsing, whilst my private one is too.

listen hard,can you hear it?

my shallow lungs barely breathing

my deceitful mind barely thinking

my frail legs barely standing

i cant feel my hands

they're shaking.

i cannot feel my body,its dieing.

there is no escape for me,no 'way out' anymore.

i'm trapped inside this prison,my body,my mind.

when will it all end?

is it soon,please say so.

because this last fight,this last battle cant be won.

though we have spent forever together and although

my hand has waved its last, although my lips have smiled its last.

i shall always be alongside you,please never forget me.

and so now i say adieu.


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Gotta love the ending. Good work.

Posted: Aug 25, 2008

Author Comment:

yeah well,it was a sad stage of my life,should i say more

so moving. i was so scared for you while reading. glad you're past it. great work :]

Posted: Nov 17, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx, dont worry im not that silly :)



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