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Interference

Poem By: TaliaBlu
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An angry horribly formatted poem used solely as an outlet for choked-up emotions. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 23, 2008    Reads: 30    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


Excuse me
Was it you
To whom I was talking to?
Could’ve fooled me. Deary, being so absent-minded.
 
My conversation
Who are you, really?
That you think something I say to another
Concerns you in any way
 
I didn’t mean harm
And the target knew this clearly
But you came in and changed the mood completely
Turned everything into bloody mary
 
Dear God, who asked you?
Who even cares?
Such ignorance makes me wish
You never too another breath
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Comments:

Great job =) I could feel the emotion you put into this.

Posted: May 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much!
I was very angry writing this.

-Tally

hi! talia. an emotionally-charged poem. well done. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks a bunch!

--Tally



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