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Submitted: Jun 17, 2008 Reads: 29 Comments: 3 Likes: 0
A simple colour
Found inside
Many people
Want it to hide
Some of the time
It will escape
From a wound
Of any shape
From inside you
It will run
Cut yourself open
For some fun
With a knife
Your arms will slice
With a blade
Your legs will dice
Slice and dice
Cut yourself up
Catch your blood
In a cup
A simple colour
Found in side
Many people
Want it to hide
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freaky. i love the imagery the whole time i read it red just flowed in my mind. im one of those people who like it to stay in there, i totally cringe at the site of blood in reality, i enjoy it in surreal and unreal scenarios cause its unreal. Wierdly my computer is crappy and red doesnt show up properly on it so i had to highlight the whole peom..... The rhyming is really darkly fun and catchy....cool
Posted: Jun 19, 2008
Wow, this is incredibly powerful ^_^ I love it very much :D You are great at conveying deep emotion through just a mere set of words ^_^ sheer talent
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Posted: Jun 22, 2008
It's really good. I only have one question, well really its pretty self explanitory, I'm just asking to avoid assuming incorrectly. Have you self-harmed? I have nothing against those who do - I do it myself- I'm just curious because this poem has such raw emotion that for someone to write it without experience would be extremely rare.
Great job. Loved the emotion, I know exactly how you feel.
~Kaori
Posted: Sep 22, 2008
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