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This poem, is one that I wrote on a whim, so to speak. The words are my words, to express my feelings on relationship. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Feb 11, 2007    Reads: 101    Comments: 6    Likes: 0   


My words may not rhyme,
to perfect all the time,
but I say what I feel,
to help me to heal.
I've had far too much pain,
I could never fully explain,
my heart ripped out my chest,
as my love, I expressed.
No one seems to see,
the destruction done to me.
Am I not worthy of love,
to miniscule to think of?
Not suitable to kiss,
or important enough to miss?
Why must I be alone,
and the depths of my love unknown?
Where is my Fairy Tale?
When will I prevail?
Will I ever be found,
or noticed as the most profound?
I just want to have my turn,
of me, someone to yearn.


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Wow, you certianly said a lot is such few words. My favorite line is: Not suitable to kiss/or important enough to miss. Nice work!

Posted: Feb 11, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you so much for your comment!

very jam packed!
you know, you don't have to rhyme in a poem anyway...
(or so I think)

: matmoo )

Posted: Feb 11, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you so much, and I agree not every poem needs to rhyme. ~JT~

Enjoyed reading this,you managed to get across something that a lot of people feel and experience,Well Done!Looking forward to reading more from you!

Posted: Mar 1, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you so very much. I'm sure I am not alone on this one, that many people feel this way. Good luck to everyone. ~JT~

You have done a beautiful job of expressing yourself in this poem.So many people could relate to this , it is what they have all been feeling and wanting to say. Fantastic format, it worked really well for the pace in this particular poem.
Thanks for sharing.

Posted: Apr 29, 2007

Author Comment:

Your welcome Sunny, and thank you for your kind words. ~JT~

Good poem which expresses much and deeply.

Posted: Jun 25, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you so much Terry. ~JT~

Very profound and moving.

Quote: "Your time is gonna come" -- Robert Plant

I truly believe this... for all of us.

Please keep saying what you feel. It's obvious from the comments you receive that others feel it too.

Posted: Jun 26, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you so much. I like the fact that I do connect with people on some level. Unfortunately in some cases it's the pain we all feel. Thanks for the encouragement! ~JT~



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