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Submitted: Jul 24, 2008 Reads: 77 Comments: 13 Likes: 6
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Hmm, interesting...not a fan of the haiku style, but your message is interesting to ponder upon lol
Posted: Jul 24, 2008
I love Haikus and after reading Jerry's and Dragon flies, and Katie's...i have started loving them even more and this one is so cute too...and that too on the most positive thing in the Universe _ SUN.....
Lovely haiku...
one doubt though ...is it must that it had to be 5-7-5 or it could be 5-5-3 like this one and do commas count...
but i must tell u one thing....whatever rules there are...i am quite ignorant....but i really loved this one honey
Posted: Jul 24, 2008
i'm beginning to write haikus here too, and this gave me a really nice example.
Posted: Jul 25, 2008
Very cute! I like reading haikus because they're short and sweet, but I have a hard time writing them lol. This one really made me smile :D
Stephanee
Posted: Jul 26, 2008
It's amazing how so few words can be so full of emotion and clarity. Haiku is good for that I guess...Great writing tin2twinkling. I really like child-like innocence of it. Beautiful indeed! Regan
Posted: Jul 26, 2008
Cute poem! Great job!
Posted: Jul 26, 2008
i like it. im not much of a morning person or sun person, but i think its a pretty poem. i can so see a kid saying it with a goofy grin. i don't know why but it does lol
Posted: Jul 26, 2008
one thing i love about haikus is that it can confused us up to no point, and it can become so straight-forward there's no effort to figure them out. nice work:)
Posted: Jul 27, 2008
good! I'd really appreciate your thoughts on my new poem: Last Flight! Thanks! -Justlaugh
Posted: Aug 8, 2008
Nice poem I liked it!
Posted: Aug 17, 2008
I like it. It's short and sweet and to the piont.
Posted: Aug 23, 2008
good message...
Posted: Aug 26, 2008
brilliant
Posted: Oct 9, 2008
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