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Submitted: Jun 6, 2008    Reads: 47    Comments: 4    Likes: 2   


Back off! Back off!
I need to nurse my wounds
You’ve no idea what I’ve been through
You tore me apart with out a single thought
Left me for dead like you always do
 
You make it so hard
To forget the damage done
You’re always around never content
To shove it in my face
Just leave me alone!
 
Back off! Back off!
I need to nurse my wounds
You’ve no idea what I’ve been through
You tore me apart without a single thought
Left me for dead like you always do
 
Now the pain you’ve caused
Makes me to hate life
Its time for me to move past you
I’ll find something better
Just leave me alone!
 
Back off! Back off!
I need to nurse my wounds
You’ve no idea what I’ve been through
You tore me apart without a single thought
Left me for dead like you always do
 
You didn’t listen to my warnings
Just like I knew you would
Maybe your hearing will improve
With a bullet in your head
 
Back off! Back off!
Finally I can nurse my wounds
Now you know what I’ve been through
I blew you head off without a single thought
Left you dead like you always did
 


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Comments:

Wow, I really liked this. It was very well written, and flowed very good. I used to try to write songs (lyrics), but I gave up after a while and just stuck to poetry. Very nice.

Posted: Jun 6, 2008

Author Comment:

ty. i was reading through some of my old stuff, the original was crap, didnt flow very well. so i had to change it around. im glad you liked it ^^
this is turning out to be fun

Its great, joel! It flows, and its.... just wonderful! I could never do this well.

Posted: Jun 16, 2008

Author Comment:

ty
^^

I really like it. You did good.

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

lol
ty
^^

i liked it and you said you where rubbish at writting...i really liked it..you did brilliantly and should give yourself a pat on the back

Posted: Jul 2, 2008

Author Comment:

lol
thx



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