This means a lot to me, actually. I was in one of those very tense moods, that were so deep it takes something big to budge them out of the way.
And well, of course, cryptic as usual *sigh*
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Submitted: Jan 30, 2008
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If this could thicken anymore<br>
than speaking would be impossible.<br>
If this could gain any strength<br>
I would be lifting cars with my finger<br>
You could thin it...<br>
even make super heroes look normal.<br>
I could change in an instant<br>
distraught to comely<br>
from yours, to the garbage's.<br>
Would I prefer fickle over the smell of a century alone sinking in?<br>
Where as fickle is, insomnia dwells<br>
on the breath<br>
on the pillow<br>
and on those lying eyes.<br>
One day I will get the chance to look upon them.<br>
And you will thin me<br>
And you will make me feel normal.<br>
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Comments:
Hm.. I think I get it. You have a couple of typos, but I'm really glad to see you writing sweetie.
Posted: Jan 30, 2008
Dreamy
Posted: Jan 31, 2008
stephanieeeeee
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sduyfjsdghfg!
EEEEEEEE!
so this is my fave of all time
i love you
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Posted: Feb 1, 2008
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